This was an assignment I had to do for Creative Writing- Interdisciplinary Arts class. This class is a summer class that me and four other Stony Brook students enrolled in. As a part of the class, we were required to attend the Southampton Writers’ Conference for a week. While there, we listened to various readings and lectures, attended an improv show and sat in on Roger Rosenblatt’s Master Class Series, and during our class time, we covered five different topics, one teach day to serve as inspiration for the piece we would write on that day. Here is my reflection of the conference and also a discussion of which topic discussed stuck with me the most and why. FYI, the five topics discussed were coastal apathy, urban blight, income inequality, animal abuse, and intolerance.
My Reflection:
Attending the Southampton Writers’ Conference was a unique experience for me. I learned a lot about creative writing from all the different speakers, got to listen to other writers share their work, and met people with whom I am now friends. I learned about different elements of creative writing, such as the core moment in a literary piece, from attending Roger Rosenblatt’s Master Classes, and I got to explore my own creative outlets each afternoon at a different location where me and my classmates would write on location about a different topic related to the site we were visiting.
For our writing assignments, we could write whatever we wanted in whatever genre we preferred. However, the assignments were unique in that each one focused on specific sensory details and different crafts that writers utilize in their literary works. It was interesting to learn about time compression, for example, where the writer uses as subtle a way as possible to describe the passing of a long period of time. It was even more fun to try and apply these crafts into my own pieces. I believe that spending a week with the CWL 320 Writers Resist class has helped me to learn to pay attention to these sensory details and crafts more in my writing and I truly believe that my writing will improve as I impart these techniques into my future pieces.
We explored five different topics that served as inspiration for our writing over the course of the week: coastal apathy, urban blight, income inequality, animal abuse, and racial/ethnic intolerance. Each of these topics is a relevant issue in today’s society. We got to listen to guest speakers talk about some of the topics and relate how writing has helped them in their own careers.
What’s interesting about some of the speakers we heard was how instead of focusing on the negative stuff surrounding the topic in question, they focused on positive aspects and used these as arguments for why we should be paying attention to these issues. For example, Chris Paparo didn’t go into all the doom and gloom of pollution and other aspects of coastal apathy; he talked about ocean life. He went over all the different types of sea creatures that live in our local bays and the ocean. His argument was that if we simply lived in the moment, we wouldn’t miss all this wonderful stuff going on in the water below and that this should serve as enough motivation for us to respect our waters and surrounding environment. We want to keep our waters full of wonderful life! On Friday, we learned about the rich history of Native Americans on Long Island at the Shinnecock Cultural Center. We didn’t focus on talking about all the intolerance that the Native Americans have faced throughout history. Instead, we learned about their way of life as it has evolved throughout the years and this helps us relate to their humanness.
The topic that stuck with me the most was animal abuse. Although we didn’t get to meet Carl Safina in person, the TED talk he did was very moving. It hit a chord deep into my heart. It was so meaningful and sentimental that I was holding back tears by the end of it. Again, rather than talk about all the horrific types and forms of animal abuse there are, Safina takes a different approach; he plays a guilt trip on his audience essentially. He raises this question in the beginning about animals: do they love us? And he answers this question by going through many different examples of animals and talking about the many different characteristics which show that they do indeed have minds and feel things as we humans do. He talks about the familial aspects that are present in wolves and elephants, for example. He also discussed how one day there was a research boat out on the water and for some reason, the dolphins wouldn’t come near the ship. It turned out that one of the researchers on the ship had died in his sleep. How could the dolphins have possibly sensed the ceasing of the heartbeat if they didn’t feel? Another question to ask: animals frequently have opportunities to attack and eat us, but they don’t. Why? Why do we abuse and eat them then?
Carl Safina proves that animals are just like us. They feel exactly as we do. He uses this as an argument for why we should treat them better than we do. Personally, I love animals and I do think animal abuse is a paramount issue in today’s society. People who abuse animals disgust me. In the piece that I wrote which was inspired by this TED talk and animal abuse in general, the beginning opens with teenage boys throwing rocks at geese in a pond. How dare they do that! And the sad thing is that there probably are people today that would consider that to be a fun activity. It’s disgusting. It needs to stop, much like all other injustice and intolerance in this world. All of the pieces that I wrote during my week at Southampton were inspired by the five topics that I explored with my class and I truly hope that they raise awareness to these issues at hand as well.
Then there were people like Neal Gabler and Robby Kinkade who spoke to us specifically about writing. The most useful piece of advice I heard all week was from Robby: write as if no one else is going to read what you are writing. If I follow this advice, I believe that my writing will improve and that writing will come to me more easily since I’m not super concerned about tweaking it for a specific crowd of people. Overall, attending the Southampton Writers’ Conference was a gratifying experience and I may consider going back to the conference next year on my own dime if I can afford it.
Here’s the link to Carl Safina’s TED talk: https://www.ted.com/talks/carl_safina_what_are_animals_thinking_and_feeling#t-5014