This paper is well-written for the most part, and it is easy to follow and understand. It follows the order of how the thesis statement is written and all the body paragraphs give relevant information. The introduction also gives enough background information and introduces the topic to the reader while maintaining the audience’s attention by making it interesting. Although there are enough sources used, one of the sources listed in the works cited page was not used in the paper. Also, some of the sentences in the last two body paragraphs are choppy and worded awkwardly; these sentences could be combined or added to in some way. In the fourth body paragraph, the audience is addressed to as “you” which should be changed in order to make the paper sound more professional. Lastly, there are issues with MLA formatting. The page number and author’s last name is not on the top right corner of each page and the works cited page is formatted incorrectly. The in-text citation for the youtube video is also done incorrectly- instead of citing “(youtube.com)” the time stamp for the portion of the video used should be cited. Overall, the paper gives enough information about automation and what measures can be taken to avoid potential problems, and with some revision and editing it could be a great paper.