I took this time to make modifications on my research paper. Some comments that Professor Seri made on my paper was that my essay focused more on the misrepresentation of black people in media rather than just a lack of representation. Another comment was that some of my paragraphs were lengthy which made them a little tedious to read and often unclear. I went back and split up lengthy paragraphs and then added to some of them so the transition would be smoother. I also edited the introduction to talk more about misrepresentation and then also made the appropriate changes to the thesis. There was one idea where it talks about black male superheroes that was incomplete because I didn’t explain the difference between a black superhero and white superhero. I went back to my source and added additional ideas to make it clearer. I also went back and fixed up some grammar problems as well as in-text citations.

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